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  • 09/2017
  • 978-0-9990791-0-2 B071WZX2DJ
  • 210 pages
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  • 09/2017
  • 978-0-9990791-1-9
  • 210 pages
  • $14.99
Steven Ramirez
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Come As You Are

Ivan just wanted the bullying to stop. Now his best friend is dead.

Ivan Stein isn’t sure he can survive seventh grade, let alone middle school. Living in a town known for its poverty and violence, he is regularly bullied along with his best friend, Ollie. But fortunes can change.

One day, Ivan finds an old notebook in an abandoned locker at school. Despite a stark warning, he takes the book and unleashes powerful magic he can use to punish his enemies.

But demonic forces control the book’s pages–a terrifying evil that will inflict suffering on the good as well as the bad and take Ivan’s soul as payment.

Life is hard, and people get hurt. But for Ivan, some things are better left alone.

Also in this collection…

“Nailed It”
“Brown the Recluse”
“I’ve Been Better”
“A Bone in the Throat”
“Regino Sings”
“A Proper Revenge Takes Time”
“Something to Hold”
“The Widow and Her Magician”
“Walker”

Reviews
Horror Palace

Come As You Are: A Short Novel and Nine Stories is a collection, featuring a short novel and several short stories. Steven Ramirez is the capable voice behind the supernatural gloom and thrills, and you will quickly learn that this author has a very subtle skill. His target audience for the short novel and I assume the anchor for the collection, is clearly young adults, although Ramirez does not shy away from the graphic details. He is clearly experienced in conjuring up a wonderful story, even if they are all drenched with innocent blood.

The collection starts with Come As You Are, the short novel based on a kid called Ivan. He is in the seventh grade and faces a daily routine of getting bullied with his best friend, Ollie. That is until Ivan comes across an old locker at school, and it holds a strange list. When Ivan starts reading from the list, the seats of power take a dramatic change. All of a sudden the bullies are taken down a step, with fatal consequences. Unfortunately, Ivan does not realize what he unleashed until it is too late.

The stories that follow are a blend of different horror/thriller themes, which I can not really connect other than by being within the horror genre. For example, Nailed It sees a writer waiting for his flight to take off, then gets bothered by a kid sitting next to him. The writer notices the kid is very organized and neat, so he tells him the story of a guy he knew with the same neurotic habit. The guy eventually went over the edge and did things I can not reveal without divulging any spoilers. Then there is A Bone in the Throat, which is based on a scam artist becoming the victim of a crazy surgeon.

All-in-all, the collection features ten powerful and very different stories.

I can start by saying all the stories move at a very quick pace. Personally, I love when an author knows what necessary detail to add while keeping the plot in motion. Ramirez came very close to perfecting this balance concerning my personal taste. At some points, I would not have minded if he lingered a little longer, but then I take into account the target audience. For young adults, the pacing will be very comfortable.

Like I mentioned in the introduction, Ramirez’s style makes every story an easy read. He is confident in the stories he wants to tell, and he knows how he wants to tell it. I am also impressed by his ability to channel the young character in Come As You Are, and selling it perfectly.  His graphical depictions are spot-on and very intense, which I loved, and it was not as restricted as I initially thought the collection would be.

The plot for the short novel may not be the most original, but it builds on such a controversial and relevant issue that you can not stop yourself from reading on. As for the other stories, the plots were a lot more surprising and unpredictable.

Out of all the elements, I liked about the collection, it is the character display that stood out the most. Ramirez truly is a master at bringing his cast to life, and then binding you to their ordeal. Overall, I think it is a stunning collection many readers will enjoy.

Self-Publishing Review

If anyone discovers a source of mysterious power that can help solve all their problems, it is probably too good to be true. That is certainly the case in Come As You Are, a chilling YA horror novella from author Steven Ramirez.

When Ivan, an often-bullied seventh grader, finds a magical notebook in an old locker at school, he thinks that his middle-school years might be salvageable after all. The list that this notebook contains doesn’t necessarily make sense, but Ivan knows that he must complete the list if he wants to unlock the full potential of this talisman. However, what starts off as a game – and a shortcut to revenge against the bullies at his school – takes a much darker turn.

It’s not long before the true nature of the notebook reveals itself, and claims its first victim, a sacrifice in the form of Ollie – Ivan’s only friend. From that point, early in the novella, Ivan’s life begins to spin out of control, and the boundary between reality and fantasy begins to blur.

Doing his own digging into the truth of the notebook, while trying to control his new demonic powers, Ivan turns to the janitor at school, a man who seems to know more than he is letting on. As it turns out, he was once in a similar position as Ivan, or at least his life was similarly scarred by that horrific book. More than four decades earlier, he had lost one of his best friends to the dark powers unleashed by that list. Since then, he has been guarding a cursed locker in the school, protecting the world, and a new generation of children, from the terrors it contains.

There is no telling what direction this novella is going to swing, as the writing is fast-paced and targeted at a younger audience, so the surprises come quickly and the scenes are relatively brief. The dialogue is fairly simplistic, but appropriate for younger readers, and Ivan’s character is well-crafted for a YA storyline.  The bullied anti-hero is a popular trope in this genre of fiction, and it works particularly well in this take on the storyline.

While the writing is highly informal, packed with slang and self-referential narration, it makes for a quick read. On the downside, some of the other characters don’t receive the same detailed attention as Ivan, such as his parents, and a few of the plot points don’t feel fully fleshed out or finished. As a whole, the story is engaging and exciting, but it sometimes moves too fast for its own good. Spending more time on description, character building, and fully developed conversations would make this novel even stronger.

Following up on a long-form trilogy of horror novels, a brief novella is certainly out of character for Steven Ramirez, but Come As You Are is successful at sending chills down your spine over the course of a fast and enjoyable read.

News
08/21/2017
Come As You Are—Goodreads Book Giveaway

Exciting news! The publication date is nearing for my new horror collection Come As You Are. To celebrate, I am giving away ten signed copies of my book. The giveaway runs August 22nd through September 20th.

09/18/2017
September Paperback Offer—Get a 20% discount!

Hey, horror fans! From now until the end of September, 2017, you can purchase the paperback edition of my new horror collection for 20% off. Just go to the CreateSpace Store and apply the coupon code UPAUZG6H. Happy reading! Peace and love.

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 09/2017
  • 978-0-9990791-0-2 B071WZX2DJ
  • 210 pages
  • $4.99
Paperback Details
  • 09/2017
  • 978-0-9990791-1-9
  • 210 pages
  • $14.99
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