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Michael Champey
Author
Daniel Stone and the Magical Scarves
m.e. champey, author
In the quaint little town of Reddington, Daniel Stone was just an ordinary boy struggling to survive the sixth grade at the Rutherford Preparatory School of Worldly Exploration. That is, until he was struck by a bolt of lightning while wearing his scarf made from the magical Winter Garden. So come join Daniel and his friends on this epic adventure as they seek lands filled with giants, pirates, and dragons! And don't forget to wear your scarf. Who knows it may be magical as well. Do YOU believe in magic?
Reviews
In Champey’s middle-grade fantasy, Daniel Stone, just shy of 12 years old, loves reading, trigonometry, and school, but he’s struggling with his studies—especially gym class—at the Rutherford Preparatory School of Worldly Exploration, where he disappoints teachers and classmates alike for not being more like his explorer aunt, who vanished on an expedition to the land of the Dragons. His path forward from being the kid who spends school days in a trash can comes from a surprising gift: the scarf his grandmother made him, which one day, when he’s nearly struck by lightning, begins to sparkle and even puff out like a parachute, saving his life. Daniel discovers that the scarf possesses transfiguration magic and can turn into anything he thinks of. Shortly after, he uses his magic to save a little girl in danger on a ride at a carnival, turning the scarf into a broom to fly on.

Daniel soon begins getting attention from the town as a hero, buoying his status among his peers. But when popularity gets to his head, and his scarf ends up in the wrong hands, he must find a way to get it back before the new owner uses it to destroy the school. Champey creates a high-spirited story that will draw in middle-grade users with Daniel’s adventures with his grandmother, his uncle, and his friend, Lizzie, plus some mysteries about the rest of the family and much lively incident, including confrontations with bullies, Badgerball shenanigans, secret missions to save the town and stoke Danile’s powers, plus much talk about his parents’ and aunt’s exciting expeditions to lost cities and beneath the sea.

Champey’s brisk, big-hearted storytelling finds fresh fun in some familiar elements, though momentum is diminished by some repetitive sentence structures (“Yes, Ashley Star was the quite the sensation”; “Yes, it was quite the spectacle”) and an overreliance on adverbs (suddenly, immediately) that slow the action. Still, the cliffhanger ending sets up the sequel with buoyant energy, and Daniel learns important lessons about how to treat others, while learning magic and discovering the interesting past of his family.

Takeaway: A middle-schooler’s magic scarf opens up a world of adventure.

Comparable Titles: John August’s Arlo Finch series, Jess Redman’s The Adventure Is Now.

Production grades
Cover: A
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: A-
Editing: B-
Marketing copy: B+

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