Assessment:

Plot/Idea: This easygoing mystery finds Simon Moody, newly transplanted to an old Victorian mansion in Caligo Falls, the recipient of a magical ring inherited from Edmund Wilder, his great uncle and former inhabitant of their new home. That ring, the Sacred Shadow Ring of Persephone, allows Simon—and his best friend Clara Barley—to investigate paranormal happenings around the town. 

Prose: Hoffman writes smoothly, sketching a mystery that builds swiftly but naturally, with crisp, clean prose.

Originality: Hoffman offers a straightforward, entertaining narrative that will appeal to readers who relish mysteries with a hint of the supernatural. The shining star is Simon and Clara’s inspiring relationship, formed on their mutual interests, a commitment to uncovering the truth, and, above all, a deep regard for each other.

Character/Execution: Hoffman sketches an easy repartee between main characters Simon and Clara, and their fun banter as they grow more intimate carries the novel. They work well together when solving the story’s central mystery, and their personalities are well-defined and appealing. Readers will be eager to see more of them in future installments.

Date Submitted: August 17, 2024