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Monk Inyang
Author
Nightmare Detective: The Skeleton King
Monk Inyang, author
Uko Hill is a twelve year old black boy in Newark suffering from the same nightmare every night - an army of terrifying skeletons breaking into his home and destroying everything. He's given up hope of ever having normal sleep until one night, in the middle of his nightmare, he meets Toni. She's part of a group called the Nightmare Detectives - a trained squad of middle schoolers that can jump into the nightmares of other kids and help stop them for good. Toni gives Uko the chance to become a Detective and he reluctantly accepts but before he can join, he must prove himself by passing a series of tests. Along the way he learns that there's a lot more to living in this dreamworld than he expected. Can he stand up to the evil that he discovers? Can he overcome his own fear and doubt to join the legendary Detectives?
Plot/Idea: 8 out of 10
Originality: 8 out of 10
Prose: 5 out of 10
Character/Execution: 6 out of 10
Overall: 6.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: This is a splendid adventure into the complexity of the human mind that asks philosophical questions while still maintaining an action-packed plot that keeps readers turning pages.

Prose: The text is littered with errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling, which damage the overall virtue of text and take readers out of the story.

Originality: Inyang's suggestion that sleep, one of the basic functions of human life, can work as an alternate universe that connects us in ways that planes and trains are unable to do makes this text a fascinating read.

Character Development: The characters here are diverse and well rendered. However, sometimes the behavior of the characters feels a bit unnatural, which is jarring for readers.

Date Submitted: July 15, 2018

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