Assessment:
Plot/Idea: Frasca offers a character-rich YA novel about Hy, who is struggling with bullying by peers and wracked with low self-esteem. Making art is Hy's only source of joy--that and a new friend, Belinda. After Hy's protest art catches on, the future begins to look to look bright.
Prose: Hy's voice initially comes across as self-deprecating and defeated. Over the course of the novel, however, Hy becomes more self-assured and optimistic. Frasca's writing nicely carries the storytelling, displaying the pain caused by bullying and challenges of being a high school outsider seeking a sense of self.
Originality: Frasca delivers a strong coming-of-age story that integrates weighty, real-world experiences (unwanted pregnancy, prejudice, depression, etc.).
Character/Execution: Hy is a complex protagonist who invites readers' compassion. Other central characters hold their own, including Belinda, Hy's mother, and supportive teachers.
Date Submitted: July 24, 2023
The narration, like Hy, is proudly unorthodox, tinged with poetry, sometimes a bit passive, and at others somewhat jumpy. But it’s powerful, especially as Hy’s journaling turns to planning increasingly elaborate artistic efforts. Hy draws on encounters with family, bullies, and friends to find exciting new forms for the words “Not My Fault.” Each piece reflects very personal relationships with each character, like the one written across the bandshell near Mr. Fadikar’s convenience store, where Hy writes the words in Hindi. Alongside exploration into injustices, Hy also deals with more personal concerns, asking “What am I” over “Who am I” as a relationship with a bully takes an unexpected turn, all as a new friend inspires new feelings of self-worth. Readers will watch Hy’s project –and self-esteem–grow across bedroom walls, library tables, and public spaces.
“I’ve got an I’m worth something forcefield around me now,” Hy declares. “Until I don’t.” Throughout, in frank and wise lines like that, Frasca powerfully evokes the breakthroughs and setbacks of creating a self and finding a voice and community, and also the process of artists, which is likely to inspire young readers in their own creative pursuits.
Takeaway: Urgent, touching YA novel about finding one’s voice through art.
Comparable Titles: Jennifer Mathieu’s Moxie, Rachhpal Sahota’s Chasing Dignity.
Production grades
Cover: B
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A-
Marketing copy: A
Not My Fault was included in BookTrib's July bookclub picks.