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Ebook Details
  • 09/2023
  • 978-0-9886440-9-0
  • 220 pages
  • $3.99
Paperback Details
  • 09/2023
  • 978-0-9886440-8-3
  • 220 pages
  • $11.99
Joyce L. Miller
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A Dispelling of Darkness

Middle Grade; Sci-Fi/Fantasy/Horror; (Market)

Twelve-and-a-half-year-old PJ Profitt’s life is complicated enough. She faces ridicule from class bullies, is burdened with an obnoxious younger brother, and has a dad who’s checked out of their relationship. Then a mysterious letter is placed in her hand, warning that time is running out for her world and telling her she’s been chosen to save it. Friends disappear and her family is threatened as she faces a powerful force that manifests itself in darkness, the dark deeds of evil men, and creeping shadows. PJ is whisked away into a world where answers came in dreams and time travel, beloved animal friends fight by her side, and an eccentric neighbor and Peruvian shaman serve as her guides.
Reviews
In this contemporary urban fantasy, children are the voices of conscience speaking to adults about the devastation of climate change. Pauline “PJ” Profitt is a red-headed Denver 12-and-a-half-year-old who deals with a stutter, her mischievous little brother, Philip, a class bully, and scary men who attempt to chloroform and kidnap her. A black Lexus drives Philip and his bicycle off the road, and her parents, who work for the environmental agency, Awake, narrowly escape deadly violence while attending a rally in Brazil. But such intimidation, including some of the apparently supernatural variety, won’t silence PJ. An eccentric neighbor, Winnow, brings her a message from an Incan shaman she met in Peru: “Only the children of the Earth can help now.”

For all those urgent themes and dangers, much of this hopeful novel portrays middle school antics and angst between PJ and her African immigrant friend Hakima, who are working on their environmental awareness school project. But PJ notices that any time someone speaks out about combating climate change, a coldness somehow manifests, and along the wall a dark, intimidating shadow seems to creep toward them. A letter addressed to PJ that her kindly retired postman neighbor had kept for the last 12 years sets in motion PJ’s destiny as one of a group of children around the world who will not be silenced by the darkness. Instead, she will speak for the children, animals, habitats, and cultures that will soon be extinct if we don’t stop the devastation.

Tween readers will relate to the schoolroom bullying, sibling rivalry, friendship dynamics, and desire to be special and valued, but will wait impatiently for PJ’s destiny to finally be revealed, and for resolution of the cryptic clues that keep their secrets hidden until the last quarter of the book. Nevertheless, the heartfelt message is in the right place that children must play an important role: to safeguard the future of the planet they will inherit.

Takeaway: A spunky tween delivers a message of hope for a world facing climate destruction.

Comparable Titles: Lauren James’s Green Rising, Mark Smith’s If Not Us.

Production grades
Cover: A-
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A-
Marketing copy: A-

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 09/2023
  • 978-0-9886440-9-0
  • 220 pages
  • $3.99
Paperback Details
  • 09/2023
  • 978-0-9886440-8-3
  • 220 pages
  • $11.99
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