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Scott Baron
Author
Daisy's Run
Scott Baron, author
Deep in space, a young woman wakes from a long cryo-sleep to find her ship damaged, the AI running things acting strangely, and the cybernetically-enhanced crew perhaps not what they seem. All she wants to do is get back to Earth, where her big plan is to sit on the beach and drink margaritas. Unfortunately, she now must find out what that nagging feeling is in the back of her mind, before it manifests into something far more real, and deadly.
Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 7 out of 10
Prose: 8 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 7.25 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: There are a few pacing problems, but the plot is well structured and engaging. There are enough mysteries to keep readers turning pages.

Prose: The prose is somewhat sparse in terms of sensory details, but will likely to engage readers nonetheless. Dialogue is a definite strong point—the use of humor and banter is particularly well done.

Originality: This story feels like a descendant of several speculative works. And though it doesn’t feel entirely new, it’s an enjoyable read steeped in just enough mystery to keep readers wondering how the journey will progress, and who'll live through it!

Character Development: Though some of the characterizations are a bit flat, Daisy and Sarah’s interplay is enough to keep things interesting. Secondary characters are solidly sketched, and this ensemble crew is definitely worth a read.

Date Submitted: May 31, 2018

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