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  • 11/2020
  • B0966Y6726
  • 263 pages
  • $4.99
Eric J. Gates
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Death Mask

Zoe Davis, late-thirties, bookstore owner, now living with a new family in Albuquerque, NM.

Ordinary. Unremarkable.

So why are Special Ops elite soldiers trying to kill her?

Perhaps Zoe isn't who she seems to be...

 

2021 Reader's Favorite GOLD MEDAL AWARD winner

Readfree.ly ''The 50 Best Indie books of 2021" Award (Nº 1 in Thriller category. Nº 3 overall)

Plot/Idea: 8 out of 10
Originality: 6 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 7.00 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: Death Mask immediately drops readers into a fast-paced, twisty plot with loads of action. As Zoe's past comes back to haunt her—and her family—the stakes escalate, and, despite some moments where the story feels contrived, the novel takes off with a bang and keeps that momentum until its staggering conclusion.

Prose: The prose is simple and straightforward, but the jumps between first and third person narration feel choppy at times. Zoe's viewpoint is riveting, though the choice to italicize the entirety of her perspective interferes with the flow.

Originality: The plot's AI component is interesting, elevating the book above much of the action and twists that feel derivative of similar secret identity dramas.

Character/Execution: As Death Mask relies heavily on action, there is little opportunity for character development, despite the fact that Zoe's first-person narration is extensive.  The story's events occur without much feedback on the characters' inner reactions and emotions, but Zoe is a tough, worthy hero.

Blurb: A secret agent, death threats, and intense action all combine to make this a riveting thrill ride.

Date Submitted: June 30, 2023

Reviews
Diogenes

Zoe Davis, former undercover operative, finds her life in danger. And not only hers: the lives of those she loves.
“[The family] have just discovered they welcomed a stranger to their midst. Someone different from who she appeared to be. Someone unexpected. Dangerous. A killer.”
Eric J Gates’ latest offering contains all the incidents and narrative energy that I have come to expect from his novels.
But Gates is that rarest of male action/thriller-writers: one who can create three-dimensional female characters who sit at the centre of events (and not at the periphery waiting to be ‘saved’ by some hunky man).
The chapters of ‘Death Mask’ are short and punchy: not a word is wasted. This makes for a very fast reading experience (“Oh, I’ll just read one more chapter. Well, maybe two…”). The author alternates between the first and third person POV, which allows him to put you inside the mind of the protagonist at key moments. Crafty. The novel is also laced with impressive weaponry knowledge and some imaginative, well-informed IT stuff. Among the bullets and explosions you might well learn something too!
Gates is my go-to author whenever I want some well-constructed escapism with a satisfyingly high body-count.
Highly recommended for lovers of the high-octane narrative.

M. J. Fine

I enjoy reading Gates. Beyond the sterling entertainment, a reader is assured of learning something new about operational tradecraft, quantum computing, Artificial Intelligence; in other words Eric J Gates is the ideal thriller writer for the 21st Century because he knows his stuff. DEATH MASK is a case in point. It's a ratatata-boom of a novel, both action packed and intriguing.

The rhythm of the writing is augmented by the brief chapters, switching at a beat between the first person perspective of Sheran, the lead protagonist - we get to 'see' her inner thoughts italicized - and well paced storytelling.

I commend the author's portrayal of women. Gates has discarded the typical sexist tropes. He doesn't waste time trying to trade on Sheran's looks, bust size and scenes of coquettish flirtation, instead he focuses on her competence, her tradecraft, her mission focus, and the overwhelming and inexplicable jeopardy she is confronting.

As is now the norm in modern publishing, every book is a set up for the sequel, and DEATH MASK is no exception. Questions still linger despite the booming termination of the plot; but this is all tantalizingly good provided Eric J Gates gets out the sequel pronto. I can't wait to read it.

Suzanne Hunt

I follow this author for a reason. I love everything he writes. Well constructed plots and believable characters that catch you up and sweep you along for a thrilling ride. It will not disappoint, I promise you. I can’t wait to see what comes next!

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 11/2020
  • B0966Y6726
  • 263 pages
  • $4.99
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