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  • 05/2020
  • 979-8642284483 B087WZKZ6K
  • 302 pages
  • $4.99
Michael Biddison
Author
DELL'S DILEMMA
ML Biddison, author

Adult; Mystery/Thriller; (Market)

Dell grew up feral on the streets of Chicago. Now she's a Deputy Sheriff in a small South Dakota county. Her uncanny street fighting skills are what brought her to the sheriff's attention. He's come to rely on her. She believes her friends count on her as well. When her friend Vicky is kidnapped by fanatics, Dell rushes into the remote compound where she's held. But Vicky refuses rescue and Dell is at a loss--until an FBI agent helps her unravel the puzzle. They find another reason to go after the kidnappers, and a deputy from a neighboring county helps out, then helps himself to Dell. Life was so much simpler when she was on her own!
Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 8 out of 10
Prose: 6 out of 10
Character/Execution: 6 out of 10
Overall: 6.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: Biddison’s novel is well-plotted and fast paced. Genre fans will predict where this mystery is headed, long before it arrives at its conclusion, but will enjoy the journey to get there. More suspense and mystery would go a long way here. 

Prose/Style: Biddison’s stiff dialogue is a hindrance to reader engagement. The book’s prose works best when setting the scene for Deputy Dell and her exploits.

Originality: Readers will indulge in the exciting, engaging premise of Dell’s Dilemma. It’s an entertaining addition to this series featuring a young professional finding her footing in law enforcement.

Character Development: The characters in Dell’s Dilemma are likable yet superficial. Many characters, including the protagonist, lack a distinct voice. Readers may find Deputy Dell unbelievable as a teenaged law enforcement official who regularly outsmarts her more seasoned officers.

Date Submitted: May 30, 2020

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 05/2020
  • 979-8642284483 B087WZKZ6K
  • 302 pages
  • $4.99
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