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Joyce Jones
Author
Embracing the Law of Attraction: Out of the Box, Into the Light
Joyce Jones, author
Embracing the Law of Attraction was written with the hope that the reader will be able to relate to the stories and scriptures. The book is designed to help the readers identify areas of their lives that need changing. By using the workbook, affirmations, scriptures, and the journal, the diligent student will begin to experience small changes, or perhaps large changes. By documenting their growth over time, the student will really begin to see how the Law of Attraction works and see their lives improve. The people who can help along the way, the opportunities that will be offered because of the change in thinking patterns, will impress them. Change and Light will become a regular part of life. Life is supposed to be FUN! Have fun with your life! Start laughing at all the little gifts that are sent your way. J.M. Jones enjoyed every moment that was used in connecting thoughts and ideas, finding relevant quotations, and Bible scripture. Her belief that each person creates their own life by the thoughts they think, has completely impacted the message of embracing the law of attraction. Since her own life has changed and has been greatly impacted by being conscious of her thoughts, it was only natural for her, a teacher, to want to share it. Part of the change includes finding daily small things to bring joy. The attitude of daily gratitude keeps the sun shining. J.M. Jones is surrounded by natural opportunities to embrace all that is beautiful in the lakes, mountains, and people, and embracing nature, honesty, and goodness, because Life is meant to be fun!
Plot/Idea: 6 out of 10
Originality: 5 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 5 out of 10
Overall: 5.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: While the author’s words are inspirational, inform the reader, and the theme is consistent, the beginnings of this guide/journal are very repetitive and the chapters blend into one another instead of being more distinct.

Prose/Style: The author is very descriptive and cohesively incorporates quotes from the Bible as well as the popular self-help book The Secret. The first two chapters are filled with paragraphs asking only questions, which can be distracting for the reader and are redundant as they are used again in the journaling portion of the guide.

Originality: This guide relies heavily on scriptures from the Bible as well as components from other well-known self-help books. The author does implement quotes from various popular songs and their own opinions as well, that do add a personal touch.

Character Development/Execution: The written portion of this guide could benefit from being condensed and restructured. The journal portion is more organized and should be more of the main focus for the reader.

Date Submitted: November 01, 2021

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