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Larry Forcey
Author
Fall of the Mighty
Larry Forcey, author

Adult; General Fiction (including literary and historical); (Market)

He was abandoned by his mother. His best friend at the orphanage is gone. And now, after a sudden and painful illness, his favorite teacher and mentor, has died. When William Jennings determines he can no longer remain behind the secure walls of St. Mary's, he embarks on a journey in which he discovers the cruelty of society from which he once was protected. As he struggles to find his place in the world, he begins to piece together bits of information that can help him uncover his hidden past. Along the way, he encounters titans of the nation's pastime, giving him a front-row seat to witness their tenacity and offering hope that he also can emerge from setback and failure.
Plot/Idea: 6 out of 10
Originality: 6 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 6 out of 10
Overall: 6.25 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: Fall of the Mighty takes place in the early 20th century, focusing on main character William Jennings's lonely upbringing, tempered by his passion for baseball, a hook that continually comforts, inspires, and motivates him throughout the novel. Forcey's love for sports is evident in this engrossing and compelling drama.

Prose: Forcey's text blossoms under his loving attention to detail, enhancing atmosphere while also emphasizing his characters' authentic interactions. His writing of on-field sports activity is particularly impressive, and the letters shared between Eli and Jennings are beautifully touching.

Originality: Fall of the Mighty is the second entry in Forcey's Diamonds through Waterloo series, where he transmits relationships, sports, and society in a thoroughly convincing manner. The final third of the book, where the crux of the story unfolds primarily through correspondence between Eli and Jennings, works particularly well.

Character/Execution: Jennings embarks on a journey of discovery that is littered with painful losses and unexpected encounters. The sharp and naturalistic dialogue between he and Eli reveals a true emotional depth to their connection.

Blurb: A brilliantly observed sports drama that plumbs life's unplanned encounters.

Date Submitted: August 26, 2024

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