Assessment:
Plot/Idea: Gilm! is a YA Fantasy/Horror novel about new kid Geoff Smith who, intent on impressing his crush, breaks his father's rules, turns to the wrong book, and accidentally plays a cursed song, which has exhilarating/frightening implications for everyone.
Prose: Corley's prose is hilarious and on-point, capturing all the agonies and ecstasies of adolescence, and his internal monologues are especially entertaining.
Originality: Gilm! is remarkable for its clever, relatable hero and the hilarious/dangerous trouble he brings on himself...and the lengths he's willing to go to in order to solve the problem.
Character/Execution: Geoff is a wonderful hero, foibles and all, with wry self-awareness and the courage to try to fix his mistakes, regardless of the cost. His dimpled dad, the pun-loving owner of Curio City, is terrific, too; his loving support of his son comes through in every interaction. Corinne and Will are also distinct individuals with their own problems as opposed to cookie cutouts billed as "hero's love interest" and "school bully." Corley's ability to write them without relying on common tropes is refreshing.
Date Submitted: April 01, 2024
Blending music, magic, and a sure sense of the challenges of finding one’s self, GILM! follows new kid in town Geoff Smith after arriving in Portland with his oddball father, who runs a magical mystery store, Curio City. The store houses taxidermy specimens including a bat supposedly once owned by Jimmy Page of Led Zeppelin, and it’s frequented by black-clothed goths, but Geoff finds the whole magical vibe embarrassing, especially the belief of some that the spellbooks sold there might hold real magic. His resistance is relatable, as he regrets leaving behind his Houston friends and would-be band, and finding his niche in his new home would be a balancing act like no other. Geoff faces the school bully, Will, who terrorizes him every morning, but finds consolation in seeing his crush, Corrine, in his history class. When he shares that he’s a songwriter, she offers him a beguiling challenge: “If you write me a song that rhymes something with the word ‘film,’ I’ll take you for pizza.” After that irresistible hook, the story takes off in amusing directions. Overwhelmed with Corinne’s challenge, and going against his father’s rules, Geoff borrows one of his Dad’s books to wish for help, despite believing the magic won’t work. Of course, magic, like creating art and sharing it with the world, never goes quite as one plans, and Geoff’s dabbling in both results in unexpected consequences, connections, and surprises, prompting a mad comic scramble to set the world back—but not sacrifice his enticing new relationship with Corinne.
Corley keeps the story brisk, funny, and poignant, though his creativity and wit cannot be contained to one medium. The author of well-received YA titles like Space Throne is also a songwriter who has recorded for over two decades years with The Mars McClanes, a Portland rock band. Their song “GILM!” inspired the novel and will share a release date—and, with luck, won’t throw existence into chaos.
Takeaway: A teen songwriter’s wish leads to comic chaos in his new school.
Comparable Titles: Sarah Gailey’s When We Were Magic, Melissa Walker's Let’s Pretend We Never Met.
Production grades
Cover: A
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A
Marketing copy: A
