Quarter Finalist

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: The author is a skilled writer and storyteller. Information is doled out evenly and subtly throughout, providing background but also moving the story forward. The plot is engaging and sophisticated, with an empowered protagonist.

Prose: The author is able to craft believable, likable characters with plausible dialogue and interactions. Description and action are also handled exceedingly well here.

Originality: This is a distinctive and refreshing work with memorable characters and an original premise.

Character Development/Execution: The author effectively handles characterization, particularly with Carlie but also with a host of secondary characters. Dialogue is particularly enlightening as the reader attempts to figure out who these people really are at their cores.

Date Submitted: August 06, 2022