Assessment:

Plot/Idea: This spiritual guidebook requires more structure and organization, as its messages and advice are inevitably lost in some of this confusion. It also does not properly incorporate or flesh out its thesis.

Prose: The writing style is choppy and stilted, which makes the overall flow of this book uneven. The book would benefit from cleaner prose to really allow the ideas to shine through.

Originality: This book touches on some very interesting ideas, but it does not expand on them enough to make them truly unique.

Character Development/Execution: The overall execution of this book is patchy, and a clear structure is needed to really make it a compelling project that will keep readers invested.

Date Submitted: November 02, 2021