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Paperback Book Details
  • 02/2024
  • 9781954163843
  • 324 pages
  • $14.95
Ebook Details
  • 02/2024
  • BOCV26NZQB
  • 375 pages
  • $5.99
Ed Marohn
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Legacy of Lies: A John Moore Mystery
Ed Marohn, author

Adult; Mystery/Thriller; (Market)

The CIA sent John Moore to gather intelligence about China’s Belt and Road Initiative in Kenya. Instead, he stumbles into a deadly conspiracy by Somalian pirates and the Socialist Republic of Vietnam to eliminate Moore’s Vietnamese friend, Colonel Tin. Assisted by Maasai warriors, he attempts to rescue the kidnapped Tin, a former NVA officer and enemy in the Vietnam War. His pursuit leads from Kenya to Zanzibar, but he soon becomes entangled with South African neo-Nazis, who plan to disrupt the Kenya presidential elections by arming various tribal factions and placing in power an extreme right-wing dictator to control the rich mineral wealth of Africa. As if this was not enough, German neo-Nazis attempted to take over the German government with support from the South African neo-Nazis. Moore rushes to stop these white supremacists while fighting his war demons.
Plot/Idea: 6 out of 10
Originality: 6 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 6.50 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: Continuing the John Moore series, Legacy of Lies is a far-flung international thriller starring the titular character, a Vietnam vet and intelligence agent. In this installment, he embarks on a mission to rescue a friend from the clutches of Somalian pirates and becomes embroiled in a neo-Nazi plot to overthrow the German government. The narrative is often riveting, though the story doesn't carry a consistently unifying thread. 

Prose: Overall, the prose is clear and appropriate for the style of a thriller, though it does get bogged down in repetitive details (often relating to airplane and weapon designations and the landscape and fauna of Africa). Frequent flashbacks to the protagonist's military operations offer backstory, but can sometimes take readers out of the more immediate action.

Originality: Marohn integrates a number of high-stakes sub-plots, with well-narrated action.

Character/Execution: In between stretches of procedural exposition, Moore reminisces about time spent in Vietnam, past operations as a CIA agent, and his emotional and physical attraction to the Vietnamese security office, Hieu. Despite his vast experience, he doesn't always emerge as a fully dimensional character. Hieu, the head of security for the Vietnamese president, proves to be an intriguing but somewhat inconsistent character, while side characters nicely populate the places and circumstances. 

 

Date Submitted: April 02, 2024

Formats
Paperback Book Details
  • 02/2024
  • 9781954163843
  • 324 pages
  • $14.95
Ebook Details
  • 02/2024
  • BOCV26NZQB
  • 375 pages
  • $5.99
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