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  • 11/2023
  • 9780988531383
  • 268 pages
  • $16.99
Doug McCall
Author, Editor (anthology)
New Girl on Louisiana Street
Doug McCall, author
Eleven year-old Mickey Foreman's goal in life is to simply survive day-to-day in small town Cypress Springs, Texas. Living with his older sister, Janice, and their widowed mother, Jessica, his life is relatively uncomplicated. Recently, however, two problems have emerged: adjusting to the daily mood swings of his first ever girl friend, Kristi, along with the potentially dangerous threat of having witnessed a confusing adult event involving the mother of a friend, and a high ranking law enforcement official, which he must keep to himself for his own protection. Both concerns are pushed to the side when he meets a new classmate, Heidi, recently having moved with her "family" onto nearby Louisiana Street. He agrees to allow the quiet, shy, yet brilliant girl to assist him with his math homework, entering her home for the first of many times. He quickly becomes engaged with her equally strange but gentle family, and is soon faced with harboring the unbelievable secret-of-all-secrets, that he can share with no one other than Janice. The results are life-changing, but ultimately tragic.
Reviews
Exploring family, friendship, acceptance, lies, and obsession in small-town Texas, this surprising coming-of-age science-fiction story from McCall (author of Thickets) centers on preteen Mickey Forman and his friendship with his mysterious classmate, Heidi Jones and her eccentric family who are hiding a big secret. Mickey makes two discoveries: first, accidently seeing his neighbor Mrs. Jane Robinson in an intimate moment with the also-married Police Chief Winston Dunaway. Second: that the Joneses are space aliens. After gossiping about the affair with his friends, Mickey unexpectedly finds himself juggling secrets, friendships and a shaky romance with his insecure girlfriend Kristi, all along with his schoolwork and the possibility of violent retribution for revealing the assignation. Meanwhile, Jane is obsessed with Dunaway, ruthlessly pressuring him to go public about their relationship, not caring if her vicious husband, Jim, attacks Chief Dunaway.

Between the science-fiction elements and the shocks of encountering adult infidelity, McCall captures preteen anxieties and expectations and the complexities of yearning for romance while still enjoying younger kid interests. The story also underlines the importance of acceptance, especially through Mickey’s older sister Jan, who mocks the Joneses before being impressed by their alien powers and calm personalities. Mickey, by contrast, feels more relaxed with the Joneses, who pleasantly insist “We are not what you would refer to as dangerous aliens,” but even as he finds comfort in their inability to be judgemental he sometimes worries if he can fully trust them.

Readers may be frustrated by the uneven pacing, as the story, told in sometimes quite-lengthy sentences, often takes too long to reveal secrets. But there’s power and charm in the lyric storytelling, which targets the heart but never forgoes suspense or unexpected laughs, including aliens’ unexpected affection for Lawrence Welk. The siblings growing closer throughout the book is uplifting, and an evening flight above Dallas, the Grand Canyon, and Las Vegas is breathtaking. The ending is abrupt but sweet.

Takeaway: Small-town coming-of-age adventure with aliens, secrets, and life lessons.

Comparable Titles: Ellen Conford’s And This is Laura, Willo Davis Roberts's The Girl with the Silver Eyes.

Production grades
Cover: B+
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A-
Marketing copy: A-

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 11/2023
  • 9780988531383
  • 268 pages
  • $16.99
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