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  • 04/2017
  • B06XW9XJD5
  • 264 (print) pages
  • $2.99
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  • 04/2017
  • 9788409024780
  • 262 pages
  • $14.95
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  • 01/2019
  • B07N33FSQ4
  • 262 pages
  • $14.81
R.K. Lander
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Path of a Novice: The Silvan Book I
R.K. Lander, Author

Adult; Sci-Fi/Fantasy/Horror; (Market)

An immortal half-blood becomes a novice warrior and joins the ranks of the Silvans as they battle Sand Lords and Deviants. He only ever had one dream; to become a Silvan captain in an army commanded by the dominant Alpine elves, colonizers of the Great Forest. There had once been another dream though – to know who his father was, but years of unanswered questions later, he told himself it didn’t matter anymore. Meanwhile, the powerful Alpine lords weave a story of racial superiority, relegating the native Silvans to second-class subjects. Village leaders, Spirit Warriors and Foresters are starting to rebel. Fel’annár learns the true meaning of warrior hood when he travels as the only novice warrior in a multi-racial patrol into the Deep Forest. As he battles the enemy for the first time, a power unfolds, one he cannot control – does not want. While friendships are forged, a destiny begins to unravel, one that is tied to a past he knows nothing about. For others though, it is only a matter of time before the truth is revealed and the danger becomes real. Can Fel’annár overcome his fears, become the warrior he always wanted to be, or will his dreams be stunted by his own shrouded past? By one elf’s lust for absolute power?
Plot/Idea: 8 out of 10
Originality: 7 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 8 out of 10
Overall: 7.50 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: This is a coming-of-tale written in the form of a heroic fantasy novel and its plot develops on two fronts that Lander keeps well balanced: the battlefield, where the hero, Fel’annár, is earning his reputation as an unparalleled Silvan warrior; and the court of King Thargodén, where intrigues are brewing that could keep Fel’annár from achieving his destiny. The pacing is satisfyingly brisk but, insofar as this is the first book in a series, several subplots are set in motion whose resolution will not be seen until later books in the saga.

Prose: There is nothing particularly memorable about Lander’s prose, but the writing serves the characters well and establishes situations with an economy of style. The dialogue between characters reads authentically for their differing personalities.

Originality: Tales of characters achieving their destinies are at least old as Arthurian legend and common in modern heroic fantasy fiction sagas. While the story Lander tells is familiar, this novel is distinguished by the powers and attributes with which he endows the characters.

Character Development: The characters are this novel’s strongest attribute. Fel’annár, who at first is scorned as the half-breed child of a Silvan elf mother and an Alpine elf father, earns the reader’s sympathy for his admirable efforts to prove his mettle in battle, regardless of lineage. Equally sympathetic and more complex is his half-brother Handir, who is charged with protecting Fel’annár and keeping him in the dark about his secret heritage.

 

 

Date Submitted: August 22, 2019

Formats
Kindle Details
  • 04/2017
  • B06XW9XJD5
  • 264 (print) pages
  • $2.99
Paperback Details
  • 04/2017
  • 9788409024780
  • 262 pages
  • $14.95
Audio Details
  • 01/2019
  • B07N33FSQ4
  • 262 pages
  • $14.81
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