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  • 09/2017
  • 9781940385068 B075FYH4XR
  • 408 pages
  • $3.99
Prophecy of Thol
Recurring nightmares haunted D’laine Jackson when she woke from an eight-month coma following a tragic accident. Four images were branded in her head: a dark-haired, handsome princely young man, a fierce reptilian monster, a white furry creature whose red eyes implored her with some unspoken message, and an ominous black robot. Now, five years later, D’laine was getting ready to go off to college. During one last shopping trip with her father and brothers for dorm supplies, a blanket of fog rolled out of the sky at Katy Mills Mall in Katy, TX, just west of Houston, in broad daylight in plain sight of dozens of witnesses. When the fog pulled back D’laine was gone. When she woke, her nightmare turned into reality.
Plot/Idea: 8 out of 10
Originality: 8 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 8 out of 10
Overall: 7.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot Ireland's novel is a fast-paced fantasy adventure, full of tropes readers will find familiar from fairy tales mixed with fresh settings and a unique take on the passage of time. 

Prose Ireland’s prose is clean and careful for the majority of the book, but the text would benefit from an additional round of copy editing. The dialogue lends credibility and a sense of authenticity to the diverse cast of characters. 

Originality Ireland’s novel borrows from such revered childhood tales as L. Frank Baum’s The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, William Goldman’s The Princess Bride, and Lewis Carroll’s Alice stories, but adds in dark and contemporary twists. 

Character Development Ireland’s colorful cast of realistic and fantastical characters includes whimsical allies and villains that are memorable and relatable. The reliable narrator offers readers comfort and a whiff of nostalgia; the Jacksons’ furry friend, Buffy, holds a role that is just as important as any of the humans or creatures in the book; and D’Laine is described as a multi-faceted being—her identities as a vulnerable human teenager and a warrior queen are intertwined. 


 

Date Submitted: April 13, 2018

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 09/2017
  • 9781940385068 B075FYH4XR
  • 408 pages
  • $3.99
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