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Nona Babcock
Author
Seeds of New LIfe
Nona Babcock, author
Seeds of New Life, circa 1862: An 88,100 word young-adult, historical fiction novel featuring Inga Johansson, 16, her parents Olaf and Helga, siblings Sophia, 11, and Karl, 2, who emigrate to America and settle in Danville, Minnesota. Inga begs her parents to allow her stay in Norway and marry her fiancé Erik Norskaag, but is denied. Their final farewell ends with consummation of their love and his promise to join her later. Arriving in America, Inga realizes she’s with child. He is born prematurely. In Danville, she meets brothers, George and Tomaas Nilsson. George, immediately smitten, aggressively pursues her with unrequited love, while carrying on an intimate relationship with Mattie Briggs. Receiving word that Erik’s ship sank, and mourning the loss of her baby, Inga attempts suicide; Tomaas rescues her, befriends her, and eventually they fall in love. A deadly feud erupts between the brothers. Inga’s uncle, Peter Stansruud, discovers his massacred aunt, cousin, and husband. Their baby is spared. Bearing a remarkable likeness to her dead cousin, the little boy clings to Inga as his mother. Kidnapping, jarring surprises, and unexpected friendships influence Inga’s fate.
Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 10 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 9 out of 10
Overall: 8.25 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: In this story of the mid-nineteenth century immigrant experience, Inga Johannson emigrates from Norway to Minnesota with her parents and siblings Sophia and Karl. Inga has had to leave behind her fiancé Erik Norskaag, by whom she is pregnant. Several surprises in the plot lead to an unexpected conclusion that is much more frenetic than is justified by the very slow pace of the earlier part of the saga. An epilogue tells the reader the fates of most of the characters, as their stories are not resolved when the novel ends.

Prose/Style: The dialogue feels formal and stilted, while in the descriptions of the setting and action the author tries to mimic nineteenth-century language.

Originality: Nona Burroughs Babcock has thoroughly researched both sea crossing and the situation and customs of Norwegian immigrants to Minnesota under the terms of the Homestead Act of 1862, which granted 160 acres of land to those who would work it and from that perspective the story will be of interest to readers of historical fiction.

Character Development/Execution: Inga is the main character here, but the most interesting characters are George and Tomaas. It is their relationship that develops as the story moves forward, while Inga and most of the other characters simply react to events.

Date Submitted: August 25, 2021

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