Quarter Finalist

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: Ryan delivers the perfect balance of setting, plot, and characters in this appealing novel, allowing the story's drama to unfold organically and with an even pace throughout. Despite their differences, the sparks between Annie and Whit are hard to deny, and readers will quickly be swept into their tale.

Prose: Ryan's skill at storytelling is evident throughout, with crisp, clear writing that still manages a rich nuance in nearly every scene. Descriptions are a definite strength in this book, worked seamlessly into the storyline to enhance the plot and keep readers informed of behind-the-scenes action.

Originality: The dynamics between the main characters are memorable here, but even more so is Ryan's ability to craft a striking setting that readers will remember long after the last page.

Character/Execution: Ryan precisely defines the main players, gifting them with relatable motives while making their connection undeniable. Readers will sympathize with Annie's luck and root for her happiness with Whit, despite his somewhat unlikely-hero status. 

Date Submitted: August 07, 2024