In this second book in the "North to Home" trilogy, Nolee and Keet navigate their faltering relationship while exploring the hazardous undercurrents of otherworldly family dynamics.
Semi Finalist
Assessment:
Plot/Idea: The Clock in the Water features a clever, inventive plot with strong character-driven moments that fuel the storyline. Readers will find Keet and Nolee to be immediately engaging, and the theme of forgiveness runs as a steady current throughout.
Prose: McDonald is a gifted storyteller, a skilled wordsmith capable of delivering brilliant context, conveying emotion, and advancing the plot with each sentence.
Originality: McDonald delivers a distinctive story line on top of consummate character development, with an unusual premise that feels rooted in folklore—this is truly an original work.
Character/Execution: McDonald excels with characterization across the board, but particularly in crafting Nolee, Keet, and Zelka—who all emanate palpable emotion paired with critical viewpoints. Shifting the narrative between first and third person perspectives gives readers insight into the characters' motives and emotions.
Date Submitted: August 22, 2023
