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Dani Alpert
Author
The Girlfriend Mom, A Memoir
Dani Alpert, author
What do you do when your boyfriend's daughter asks you for a tampon two minutes after first meeting her? And how young is too young to curl up and watch "Borat" with said boyfriend's son? Dani mulls over these questions and more while highlighting her unconventional and pseudo-parenting role as the Girlfriend Mom.
Plot/Idea: 8 out of 10
Originality: 8 out of 10
Prose: 8 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 7.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Idea: Told from a humorous perspective, this work is based in a strong premise. Not many memoirs focus on the relationship between children and a live-in girlfriend.

Prose/Style: The author is an effective and clear writer, often funny and brutally honest. It is easy for readers to become involved in her life and in her text.

Originality: While this book feels quite original, it may only garner a niche audience of women who have found themselves in this exact situation.

Character/Execution: The narrator's character is well-developed as is the personality of Tyler. However, Julian's character is never made quite clear. He seems on one hand lenient with his kids, but controlling and manipulative with the narrator.

Date Submitted: October 02, 2020

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