Assessment:
Plot: The narrative provides ample conflict and plot twists to keep readers enthralled while maintaining a fast thriller-like pace. There are no glaring plot holes, and readers are left satiated in the end. However, some improvements could be made by eliminating the occasional and needless over-exposition of scenes.
Prose/Style: The author masterfully guides readers through the more complex industry-insider concepts without leaving them overwhelmed; however, the text may benefit from eliminating situational hyper-detailing, which does not add to the setting and development of the narrative and only distracts the readers. Additionally, as the story progresses, the writing becomes less diverse and occasionally clumsy.
Originality: The plot is original, modern and refreshing, without over-relying on common tropes and clichés. Characters are equally unique and break through the stereotypes.
Character/Execution: The characters here are presented in a tangible way without over-relying on early expositions of their motives and intrinsic drivers. The characters are thought out and continually evolve throughout the novel, making them and the story engaging and somewhat relatable.
Date Submitted: July 28, 2020
