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  • 12/2018
  • 978-1949746488
  • 174 pages
  • $9.99
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  • 04/2015
  • B0793PZNSR
  • 174 pages
  • $2.19
The Magic Keys of Tanglewood
She took a step backward and threw the key on the ground. With the voice now shrieking at her, the young girl took another step back. Sweat trickled down her face as she struggled with the voice in her head, but she could feel the control of her limbs returning to her. Then the heavy door suddenly opened on its own to reveal a strange, weirdly colored world inside. Truly frightened now, the young girl began to turn around when a hand that looked more like a claw with its blood-red nails, reached from inside this smelly world and grabbed her gown. Before she could tear herself free, the hand pulled the young girl inside with tremendous force. The young girl screamed from deep inside as the big door shut in her face with a loud thud.
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BlueInk Review

In Malcolm Chester’s novel, four 14-year-old girls who attend a private school struggle to free young students abducted by another student who has turned into an evil witch.

Skylar, Carly, Peggy, and Jade will soon attend Tanglewood, a centuries-old prestigious girls’ school. At a sleepover, Skylar tells them about its terrible legend, explaining that centuries ago, a student named Samantha bullied a fellow student named Elizabeth. Elizabeth then warned students that every Halloween one of them would vanish, and, with each student’s disappearance, a lock would appear on the school gate. The girl would then be trapped in a place “between this world and heaven” until the key to the lock was found. Later that night, a ghost appears and reveals that the “magic” keys lie hidden somewhere in tunnels beneath the school.

The four friends set out to free the trapped students, but Skylar and Carly get pulled into the netherworld and must finish the quest for the keys, facing endless hazards: ferocious bears and wolves, biting vampire bats, projectile spears, and more. Luckily, they get some inside help from the imprisoned students, many of whom are now centuries old.

While an interesting premise, the book has major flaws. The limited, middle-grade vocabulary prevents rich descriptions and well-honed, rounded characters. The plot to rescue the captive students stops and starts, interrupted by the girls’ endless pursuit of boys, which is both tiring and offensive; the girls and their respective boyfriends judge each other in superficial ways, continually making tasteless comments.

In addition, there’s a plethora of unhealthy body-image messages. “Girls obsess too much about their weight,” says Jade — after the four counsel a girl despondent about her weight: “If you lose thirty pounds, you’ll have earned your way into our group…”

The simplistic vocabulary marks this as a middle-grade story, but the content is more appropriate for young adults. Unfortunately, the story requires revision to attract either audience.

Foreword Review

In the supernatural novel The Magic Keys of Tanglewood, girls at a prestigious school pursue a generational mystery.

In Malcolm Chester’s novel The Magic Keys of Tanglewood, girls at a prestigious private school uncover a curse that’s plagued the institution for centuries.

The “fab four” is made up of thirteen- and fourteen-year-old girls: Skylar, Carly, Jade, and Peggy. They’re students at Tanglewood, a school that Skylar’s family opened generations before. Family folklore suggests that there’s a curse on the school, placed there by a witch, Elizabeth, who was bullied and sought revenge. Girls go missing each year, and mysterious locks appear on the property without keys.

Carly, who is sensitive to supernatural energy, meets a ghost, Constance, who confirms that the missing girls, and the keys to their locks, are being kept in a realm between reality and magic that was created by Elizabeth long ago. Although they’re busy with school work and budding relationships, the friends decide that they have the knowledge and power that’s needed to search for the keys, break the curse, and free the missing girls of Tanglewood.

The girls are constructed using stereotypes. They spend their time discussing fashion, shopping, and boys, and they engage in constant cattiness and competition when it comes to looks and love. Individually, Skylar is brooding and mysterious; Carly is sweet and psychic; Jade is boy crazy, and develops a cheerleading routine involving sexy underwear; Peggy is underdeveloped and less involved in the story. The boys in the book are of similar stock, exhibiting a sense of possession over their girlfriends. They take a lazy attitude where romance is concerned, and are prone to violence when others seem interested in their girlfriends.

Further, one teenage boy is described as a “potent sex symbol”; the novel’s frequent sexualization of minors is uncomfortable and awkward. And secondary to the main plot, the girls deal with a bully, whom they say can join their group if she loses weight; while this is framed to be encouraging, the interaction swells with fat shaming and harmful beauty standards. Stilted character exchanges cement the book’s reigning sexism and heteronormativity.

Although the group finds out about the curse and meets Constance early in the novel, there is no sense of urgency when it comes to finding the keys or saving the lost girls; instead, the teenagers spend most of their time concentrating on school and inventing scenarios to test the loyalty and interest of their boyfriends. When the in-between world is finally entered, many new, underexplained characters are introduced, including the evil witch Elizabeth. The supernatural elements of Elizabeth’s world and her powers are underdeveloped, though they lead to active fighting scenes. Still, the book’s casual approach to crises dulls the book’s drama and potential to be surprising.

In the novel The Magic Keys of Tanglewood, girls at a prestigious school pursue a generational mystery, pointing to further adventures.

Reviewed by Delia Stanley
July 20, 2021

Formats
Paperback Details
  • 12/2018
  • 978-1949746488
  • 174 pages
  • $9.99
Ebook Details
  • 04/2015
  • B0793PZNSR
  • 174 pages
  • $2.19

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