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Paperback Details
  • 978-1-964869-00-1
  • 365 pages
  • $16.95
Ebook Details
  • 10/2024
  • B0D7QH52SN
  • 365 pages
  • $4.99
Joseph Macolino
Author
The Shadows of Erathal

Adult; Sci-Fi/Fantasy/Horror; (Market)

An ancient treasure reemerges. Whispers of evil echo through the shadows. As a new power rises, only one thing is certain: Evorath will never be the same. Jaldor lives a peaceful life. Tending his farm, caring for his family, and feeding his community. But his entire world is turned upside down when a malevolent force arrives to threaten his family. In the moment when all seems lost, unexpected heroes arrive and renew his hope for the future. After years of adventuring as a bounty hunter and mercenary, the shapeshifter Zelag returns to his family. But the unsettling news he brings threatens to shake the very core of their peaceful community. He and the other heroes must work quickly if they hope to quell the shadows of Erathal. As the heroes of Erathal shine light on the shadowy underbelly, they discover terrifying alliances that threaten to plunge the continent into war. And with the imminent invasion of a dark elf army, it’s clear that not everyone will make it through the night. Faced with overwhelming odds, can these motley heroes survive another day? The Shadows of Erathal is the thrilling first book in The Legends of Evorath epic fantasy series. If you enjoy expansive world-building, mind-bending magic, and believe family is deeper than blood, you’ll fall in love with Joseph P Macolino’s fast-paced adventure.
Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 6 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 6.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: The Shadows of Erathal, book one of the Legends of Evorath series, is a likable if fairly typical fantasy adventure novel. The characters are well written and overall vision is quite creative, successfully crafting an interesting and imaginative universe.

Prose: Macolino's text is full of convincing and dense fantasy language which occasionally contains powerful graphic descriptions of events. His expressive writing style is particularly effective at heightening the emotional intensity of the characters' relationships and their surroundings.

Originality: The Shadows of Erathal is a fairly straightforward fantasy novel with well crafted characters and interesting worldbuilding. Unfortunately, it ultimately suffers from an overreliance on dialogue that has a tendency to be rather dull and ponderous.

Character/Execution: Central protagonist Jaldor's world is turned upside down by a sinister presence in a lively good against evil fantasy. This heroes versus villains adventure story features interesting supporting characters like Zelag the bounty hunter and a formidable dark elf army.

Date Submitted: July 02, 2024

Formats
Paperback Details
  • 978-1-964869-00-1
  • 365 pages
  • $16.95
Ebook Details
  • 10/2024
  • B0D7QH52SN
  • 365 pages
  • $4.99
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