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John Shoberg
Author
The Stone Ship
A large piece of a spaceship made of stone is discovered in a newly explored stellar system. A team of scientists is assembled to study it, but a part of the team is sent off to look for lifeboats for the alien spaceship. They find themselves stranded on a planet and have to cannibalize their own shuttle to use the stone lifeboat to get off the planet. Meanwhile, another ship is approaching the group of scientists studying the derelect stone ship. Is it the builders of the stone ship? Or the race that managed so much damage to a ship made of stone?
Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 7 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 7.00 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: The concept of the story is interesting, and the author attempts to establish a unique world for the readers to explore. It takes time to relate to the book, but eventually, a reader can become invested in the story.

Prose/Style: The language can get slightly technical, but that is the nature of the genre. The flow could be more natural, as overall the book's prose is not overly stylized.

Originality: The central idea of the story holds a lot of potential, but readers who are not into the genre might find it difficult to connect with the story. As the central character explores the newly discovered solar system, she and her team run into some trouble that could cost them their lives.  

Character Development/Execution: At the start, it's difficult to connect with the main character, but readers get to know her once the story progresses. Other characters support the main character well.

Date Submitted: July 10, 2021

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