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  • 03/2018
  • 198055160X B07BQG1TM6
  • 402 pages
  • $2.99
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  • 03/2018
  • 978-1980551607 198055160X
  • 402 pages
  • $12.99
H. A. Pell
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The War Within
H. A. Pell, author

Jack Thomas, an Iraq War hero, returns from service and finishes law school. He's now an FBI Special Agent and SWAT team leader. Thomas is assigned as commander of a joint terrorism task force . Calvin Hendricks is a Viet Nam veteran turned mercenary. He fought with the mujahideen in Afghanistan against the Russians, married a tribal chief’s daughter, and took up the Taliban cause. Hendricks is the mastermind and leader of a homegrown terror cell. With al Qaeda's help, he is set to wage war and kill thousands of Americans.  Jack leads the hunt to catch the terrorists but is faced with conflicts in his personal life that could derail his command and affect his career.  His younger brother, facing trial for a crime he didn't commit, is counting on Jack to be his lawyer. They saw their father, an Army general, leave their mother in her greatest time of need. How can he abandon his brother now? A woman enters Jack's life but she's an agent assigned under his command, and then his love from the past reappears. The attacks begin, and Jack must make choices—and stop the terrorists before it’s too late.  Historic events provide a backdrop for this story, including the wars in Viet Nam, Rhodesia, Afghanistan, and Iraq; the Oklahoma City bombing; and the attacks on 9/11. The terrorists' motivation and actions—and the heroic response to terrorism—are based on today's headlines around the world.

Plot/Idea: 6 out of 10
Originality: 6 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 6.50 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: This is an ambitious work of military suspense. But at more than 92,000 words, the book is far too long—the suspense and pacing are often impeded by ill-placed backstories.

Prose: Pell’s prose is quite solid, with his transitions between narrative and dialogue done well.

Originality: Unfortunately, there’s very little in Pell’s novel that sets it apart from other books in a crowded market.

Character Development: The character development here is solid. The author provides insight into character motivations and renders the relationships between the players well.

Date Submitted: April 24, 2018

Formats
Ebook Details
  • 03/2018
  • 198055160X B07BQG1TM6
  • 402 pages
  • $2.99
Paperback Details
  • 03/2018
  • 978-1980551607 198055160X
  • 402 pages
  • $12.99
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