Assessment:
Plot/Idea: The author has crafted a complex and engaging plot that includes a lot of background detail that at times becomes overwhelming. The unusual names make some of the context challenging to remember for readers unfamiliar with Valkyrie folklore. The reader would be better served by parsing out this information in smaller doses or only mentioning those key to the storyline to help the reader fully grasp and retain pertinent details.
Prose: The author is a strong writer, able to effectively convey emotion in particular, but equally adept with action and dialogue. The prose is clear, age-appropriate, and direct.
Originality: Although the foundation of the work is based on Norse mythology, the author makes the storyline distinctive and populates the plot with complex characters.
Character/Execution: The author does a stellar job with characterization. Emotions and uncertainty shine through, and the reader knows exactly what motivations and fears are at play.
Date Submitted: July 26, 2023
