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What Is In Your Hand?
Martha Kinney, author
What is in Your Hand?
Martha Kinney
Moses led the nation of Israel from slavery What is in Your Hand?
Martha Kinney
Moses led the nation of Israel from slavery to
their promised land with just a shepherd’s staff.
As common as it appeared, that staff contained
hidden powers that accomplished great things,
from defeating the greatest magicians of Egypt to
bringing water from a rock.
Like Moses, each of us possess powers we may not
even recognize though they are within us. All we
need to do is recognize what we have in our hand.to
their promised land with just a shepherd’s staff.
As common as it appeared, that staff contained
hidden powers that accomplished great things,
from defeating the greatest magicians of Egypt to
bringing water from a rock.
Like Moses, each of us possess powers we may not
even recognize though they are within us. All we
need to do is recognize what we have in our hand.
Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 7 out of 10
Prose: 6 out of 10
Character/Execution: 6 out of 10
Overall: 6.50 out of 10
Assessment:
Plot/Idea: This guide uses examples from religious text to empower the user to improve their outlook on life, and while currently cohesive, it could improve through creating a stronger connection with the reader.
Prose: This guide is well-written, with an even flow. Some paragraphs grow repetitive and might be fine-tuned to become more succinct.
Originality: The author uses examples of more obscure Biblical figures to inspire and teach the reader.
Character Development/Execution: This guide is organized and focused on the author’s main vision, but certain paragraph formatting could be altered to improve readability.
Date Submitted: December 02, 2021
